비교대조 영작문

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원어민 교수님께 한달에 걸쳐 3번 교정을 받은 final draft영작문 입니다. 교수님이 굉장히 깐깐하셔서 완성하는데 무척 힙들었던 만큼, 문법이나 논리구성에서 완성도 높은 영작문일 것이라고 자신합니다.^^ 참고로 10점 만점에 10점 맞은 것입니다. 개인적으로 가는 여행과 여행사를 통해가는 패키지 여행의 비교라는 신선한 주제를 가지고 논리적으로 쓴 글입니다. 그냥 바로 내도 될만큼 완성도가 높습니다.
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These days, many Korean university students want to travel to Europe during summer and winter vacations. According to research Jo Sun Newspaper, one of the most reliable newspapers in Korea, seventy percent Korean university students have gone abroad, and among them, twenty-five percent students go abroad for traveling. They want to travel abroad to have various experiences, enlarge their vision, and just relax. As most students do not have enough money to travel, they have to concern about some factors carefully before traveling. Students should choose whether they travel by travel agencies or travel individually, before thinking about some factors, such as where they go, and how long they travel. Some people prefer to travel individually because they can travel without conventional plans by travel agencies. However, package tours are more appropriate for university students who want to travel to Europe during their summer and winter vacations than traveling individually.

참고자료

· http://www.chosun.com/economy/news/200507/200507190088.html
· http://cafe.daum.net/tourjjang7
· http://cafe.daum.net/daumtour